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Why Do They?
By rilLie
08 August 2006
Just a list of random questions i've never found answers for... Taho is a local snack. It has tofu, a thick, sweetened type of syrup and gulaman.

why do they call our study period SSP?
why can't the teacher just pick me?
why do Filipino's cover their heads when it rains?
why do relievers never relieve pain?

why does my brother never take showers?
why does my sister expect a lot of power?
why do my cd's simply vanish throught the air?
why can't i ever, ever fix my hair?

why do i always break out,
just before that dinner out?
why is my taho always too dry?
why do my classmates, forever lie?

why does my smoothie have more ice than flavor?
why do girls always love flowers?
why are the cute guys, there, where i can't see?
why are there so many mysteries all around me?

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Written by givitsum (651 comments posted) 9th August 2006
You certainly are a busy little Pinoy rilLie. I am more of a chicharon man myself than tofu. But pork adobo beats the lot, hands down. 
 
Mabuhay to GW 
 
Givitsum
thanks...
Written by rilLie (327 comments posted) 9th August 2006
i like pork adobo.. but i think Sinigang rocks better than adobo... all hands and feet down... :grin  
 
Mabuhay! 
 
-rilLie 
 
0_o

Written by Gill21 (566 comments posted) 9th August 2006
Again a very sweet and childlike poem. I enjoyed this also.  
What are you two on about? You're talking gobbildegook. :?
thanks!
Written by rilLie (327 comments posted) 9th August 2006
thanks.. i couldn't really do anything and I was connected to the internet.. i felt like writing at that time... 
 
anyway.. it's just a list of questions i've always asked myself and no answers really come to me. another one i couldn't add was the ever-longing question: "why does my adobo always have basil leaves still in it?!?"... 
 
adobo's a local dish, one of my favorites (and aparantly Givitsum's to die for). 
 
well, thanks anyway! 
 
-rilLie 
 
p.s. you wonder why it's childlike? it's written by a child. 
 
 
0_o
TO MY NUMBER ONE FAN - AN ANSWER
Written by Josie (2825 comments posted) 14th August 2006
If I knew the answers to your questions, 
Would you think that I was wise? 
But,  
Would you believe me with my answers 
Or think I told you lies?

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