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Niqaabi/No Face
By Trifox
08 August 2006
The title says it all really. Not the best thing Ive ever written though...

Hide yourself under
Swathes of darkest night,
Eyes like stars in a
Far away place.
No skin to see,
No figure No face.
You smile as they try
To judge and to rate.
To give you a place.
Outside of that tent,
That you wear in name
Of Gods Grace.
With your eyes like stars in a
Far away place.
No skin to see,
No figure No face.

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I liked this
Written by Leo (573 comments posted) 9th August 2006
This was a good piece of writing.  
 
Thanks for sharing. 
 

Written by Trifox (3 comments posted) 9th August 2006
Thanks ^_^
Brave choice
Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3174 comments posted) 9th August 2006
Ilike to see people adressing difficult subjects.It was an interesting piece of work 
cheers 
BBS

Written by Gill21 (566 comments posted) 9th August 2006
A beautiful poem. Well done.

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