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Poetry
just peachy
By arrowsmith10
13 August 2006
after studying john donne i decided to write something a little controversial but innocent at the same time

Just peachy

Exotic delicacies
Elate my taste buds,
My mouth waters.
Forbidden fruits
Tantalize my taste buds,
I lick my lips
In anticipation,
The smooth shape is enticing,
Slowly seducing me,
I nibble my bottom lip
Trying to refrain.
The longing…. Unbearable
I gently brush past it.
My senses heighten,
Skin tingles
I reach out
This time,
Tracing the soft velvety cleft
Gently with my fingers.
I can stand it no more.
Biting down into the soft (fuzzy) flesh
The climax.
The sweet juice dribbles down my chin.
Satisfied.

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naughty but nice
Written by Leo (573 comments posted) 14th August 2006
i'm off down the fruit and veg stall... 
 
great writing!
Mistaken Identity?
Written by gerardconnolly (1186 comments posted) 14th August 2006
It was OK. But I fear you may have to study John Donne a little more closely if it is the same fellow who wrote  
' Batter My Heart' et al. If it's John Dunn, I've never heard of the blighter. 
 
Slan!

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