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| Falling Apart. | |
| By EvilPixie | ||||
| 13 August 2006 | ||||
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This is a song that I have writen for my lover. It means alot to me, and was inspired from a song that Jewel has Writen. "Foolish Games" is the name of the song, you will see charecteristics from that song in this one but they are in no way the same. Hope you all enjoy. 13-08-2006, 15:02:02 Here we are at a crossroads.My life is standing before you. A different road is beckoning you away from me. What will the path be that you choose? A simple girls heart, or just starting over with a new start. I can never really talk about, how I am feeling. I am always scared of what might happen. Dose it really make a difference, what is said in life? That sorry means nothing, that words are so empty. What is I love you with out looking in the eyes? Can truth be told, through the angry lies? These are my tears before you, thing my hearts pain written in ease. These foolish games we play are ripping us apart. The thoughtless words we say, break me apart. My heart is falling apart. You are always brilliant, when I am near you. I feel like I am caught out in the rain, dancing in the drizzle. And the kiss we share holds such passion, like when you hug me closely. I have always been in love with how you smile. When you do hold me at night I feel like a safe child. Don’t miss-understand me for being a bitch, it’s just how I am when feeling like this. When we don’t talk, I feel my heart squeeze, I feel like I can’t breath. This is my hand extend before you, will you please came and dance with me. These foolish games we play are ripping us apart. The thoughtless words we say, break me apart. My heart is falling apart. I know I can get out of hand, I feel so alone… trapped in my own dark ally. And I feel what is good for me never gets a chance to reach out and be heard. I need a friend, I need help, I need to feel security, I need my lover darling please. I need this all from you, don’t you see? Please help me pick up the pieces to the girl you once loved, bear with me please! I am only a emotional wreck on my knees. And these foolish games we play keep ripping us apart. The thoughtless words we say is breaking my heart! I am falling apart. Your always brilliant and I love it! Like I am caught out in the rain.
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