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| Renting a Room in The Village | |
| By patterjack | ||||||||
| 14 August 2006 | ||||||||
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Settling down for a longish stay Room for Rent. The garden was well kept , but with some flower beds bare and ready for replanting . Jenny pushed the door open , and called inside : -- Dad , are you there ? There was no apparent reply , so she looked nervously around at Peter and asked : -- Would you mind waiting a minute while I just check to see if Dad is at home? He's sometimes out in the back , writing , and doesn't hear anyone . Peter signalled his assent , though he was a little puzzled as to the reference to writing , and while he waited he studied the rather grotesque garden gnome that lay tipped on its side , apparently waiting to be replaced . He was about to walk over to look at it more closely when Jenny reappeared and called him. He stepped in through the open door and at Jenny's direction , deposited his rucksack in the hall . -- Come on through and meet Dad before I show you the room , she said . He's been working out the back in the garden shed . So Peter followed her through the house and back kitchen to the back door , where a figure with a familiar face stood looking in slight bemusement at a sheet of paper he was holding. -- Good heavens , exclaimed Peter . We've already met ! You're the milkman . -- Right , said the man , looking Peter up and down . You were quick to catch up with me . Jenny tells me you were wanting to rent a room . -- Yes, said Peter . If it's as nice as the rest of your place it would be very suitable , I think . -- I'm Ernie , the man introduced himself . You bought a Gold Top from me earlier . As a matter of fact I was just writing a poem about you . Noticing Peter's surprise , he added : -- Oh I write lots of poems about lots of things that go on round here . You being new to the place , you deserve a mention in my Village Odes . Here , let me read the couple of lines that I've got down so far . -- Oh no , dad , cried Jenny , Mr Jack will want to see the room , not hear you recite. -- It's quite all right , laughed Peter . I'd like to hear it , I've never had a poem written about me before . The old man looked quizzically at Peter , cleared his throat and began: With the cold air of the morning reddening his cheeks , The stranger puts his rucksack down and seeks to purchase refreshment from the clanking crates that line my float , and courteously awaits while I take out a Gold Top , worth forty p and he takes out all his change which he offers me -- It's a bit rough . I've only just started . I was going to turn it into a story poem , but now that you might be staying I'll wait a while before I add any more . -- I'll be interested to hear what you write , said Peter , but before the old man could say anything further , Jenny tugged on Peter's sleeve and led him back inside . -- It's upstairs , said Jenny . It's a bit small . It used to be my room when I was a kid , but now I've moved down here to a bigger room at the back . Upstairs , Peter examined the room , which was indeed quite small , still painted in nursery colours , and with a kitten dado around the wall. The bed was also small , but having gained Jenny's permission , Peter tried it for size. He just fitted it for length . -- Seems pretty good to me , he said . What will you charge ? For bed and breakfast ? -- You'll have to work that out with Mum , said Jenny . I'd say that you could get breakfast at the cafe every morning . -- Good idea , said Peter , and feeling the need to settle things quickly , he suggested they go straight back to the cafe , meanwhile leaving his rucksack at the house. Jenny called out to her father , telling him what they were abut to do , and he absentmindedly acknowledged it , while gazing at his work in hand . Back at the cafe , they got down to business . Mrs George named the reasonable sum of thirty five pounds a week , including breakfast at the cafe each morning , payable a week in advance. Peter was only too happy with that arrangement , and left the cafe to go to the bank to get the requisite cash . It looked as if he was going to enjoy his stay in the village .
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