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| Phill's 53rd | |
| By snax0 | ||||||
| 15 August 2006 | ||||||
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I just knocked this up in a few minutes - feels great that it came out all kind of natural! For your birthday! To my husband today, your 53rd year lets go out to eat and drink lots of beer! There's much to be mulled and some time for a moan but in honesty mate you can do that alone You're an ok guy selective deafness, and grey but if you think of it Phill it's really ok You've nothing to worry about with the silvery hair and your legs look just great due to your golfing flair So, uphill and down dale after a tiny white ball what a way to spend your life not much fun at all But you winge and you snore and you drink till you drop you laugh like a girl and you sing along to pop I think you're quite cool and some think you are great as you're a fun-loving guy and you hate being late So I'm thinking of you but it's not half as much fun as writing this poem whilst scratching my bum!
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