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| Lunesta | |
| By bloodange77 | ||||
| 15 August 2006 | ||||
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This came to me for no reason at all. I know it might be horrible but i wrote it last night half asleep. so i don't really care if it sucks but you can point it out anyway. Lunesta is to blame, For the flame. The flame of love, Beautiful as a white dove. Put out by the dark, Like a child at the park. Never to be for me, For it cannot be. We were a pair, But life is not fair. It took you, Now I'm in the blue. But not for long, Sad as a love song. So now you've left, And feeling is bluffed. I'm so numb, Like a deadman's thumb. If I could drown, You would not frown. You broke my heart, Like ripped up art. You made me happy, This story is sappy. Now like life intends, This poem ends.
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