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Love Is For Ever

By Buchan

16 August 2006

Beauty of love often forgotten in the struggle of life. Just pause and accept love in all it's wonder.

                      Soft touch like air as I kiss your lips
                        Warm as we exchange the breath of life
                        Wondering the beauty in the face I kiss
                        Such love from a sweet soul that sings

                        Your name is "love" you have captured me
                        The prisoner in the cell,I am at your mercy
                        No freedom without love,no life without you
                        Like flowers in a vase,you contain my being

                        Together ,as green is with meadow grass
                        You are my friend,my companion,my heart
                        Life will pass away,sure as winter follows autumn
                        Love of this moment,never fly on forgotten wings.

Reviews

Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3590 comments posted) 16th August 2006

I suppose it is the "biggie" and full marks for trying to capure the concept of love in words. Your'e in some pretty elite company for trying. and for me it works but I think you're a hopeless romantic at heart just like me
And thanks for your lovely comments on my story
cheers
Mrs B

Written by Leo (573 comments posted) 17th August 2006

I particulalry like the second verse. great stuff.

Best regards

Forever - - - - - - - -
Written by Josie (2849 comments posted) 17th August 2006

Tell the "granny" in my "SHE" poem this. She lost her identity somewhere down the line. ha ha

Written by niki (6 comments posted) 6th October 2006

Flowery and romantic. Bets on you're just in your first few weeks of the relationship then eh? Hehe, just kidding. Gorgeous, lovely stuff, I wish this was the kind of space we could all travel in, at all times. Reminds you to stop and just FEEL for a bit. Nice one.

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