This poem is inspired by Helen Cixous & will hopefully give Womanhood another boost on this battle that has broken out on the poetry section!!!
I am writing in white ink.
Not the stereotypical pink.
Colourless, invisible words
Are waiting for the revelation
Of the untouched fruits of nature
Which are longing to be suckled,
Devoured; the taste of purity and life…..
……will spill forth one day
And wipe over the
Bold, Black print of Man.
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He he
Written by givitsum (651 comments posted) 18th August 2006 |
You can bring yer fruits over fer a good sucklin' anytime yer like like, darlin'. Just make sure you bring a six pack with yer. Phwoooaaarr!!
Big G. |
Written by brook_rivers (486 comments posted) 18th August 2006 |
Now how did i know you were going to leave a comment like that?! Womens intuition eh?!
Ms Rivers |
Blasphemy
Written by givitsum (651 comments posted) 18th August 2006 |
Wipe over the bold, black print of man?
You are obviously not familiar with any of the outpourings from MangoTheChutneyMan! It'd take a damn site more than the fruits of nature to wipe out HIS monolithic works! Something more akin to an atomic bomb would be my choice of weapon to attempt such a feat.
Wash your mouth out, Ms. Rivers!
G.
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Hmmm
Written by Talisker (1336 comments posted) 18th August 2006 |
The new Virginia Woolf? In these days when JK Rowling outsells every male writer on the planet - is the militant feminist undercurrent still relevant?
I enjoyed the piece anyway - very accomplished style. |
Written by brook_rivers (486 comments posted) 18th August 2006 |
Will some one please explain the mango chutney man to me?!!!
Atomic bomb! I dont think so Mr Givitsum - coz you ain't seen my fruits! LOL
As to Talisker very true we should not need to point this out to men but I dont think they have quite grasped this fact yet, they are indeed blinded by their egos!
B. Rivers |
Ah.. Rivers..
Written by gerardconnolly (1186 comments posted) 18th August 2006 |
My Dear Ms Rivers,
If you are unaware of the thunderclap that is MangoTheChutneyMan either you are ignorant beyond redemption; or have been holidaying on the dark side of the moon. The earth has moved since you poped put for a fag. Seisemographic plates have swapped their moorings and poetic literature will never be the same.
MangoTheChutneyMan has redefined the art of the neo- romantic poet. His seminal work on unrequited love : 'Fuck Me . Me Tart's Gone AWOL' was published on this site and lead to nothing short of a sensation. His subsequent rediscovery of platonic longing;' She Give Me A Mexican Mule's Length' followed to equal acclaim. Since then, nothing. Doubtless exhausted, he has fallen silent. if you can assist with his whereabouts contact me or Givitsum.
Slan! |
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