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By oxy
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18 August 2006 |
Michael there's something I want to tell you….. Your feet smell
your the zit from hell
you think you’re smart
but you’re just a fart
you think your tough
and you’re just a scruff
But when it comes to mate's
there is no other
you’re the best
Happy Birthday Brother |
Abuse!
Written by Phil (6959 comments posted) 23rd August 2006 | Clever piece. Good contrast beginning and end. Have to admit, I prefer the abuse in the first half, but it's the ending the makes it work.
Phil. |
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