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A mans world - round 3

By sasquatch

18 August 2006

Givitsum and BBS,

a decent premise for a trans-gender scrap for sure.

Here's my effort.

Gerard, you seem like a man of experience, step up fella!

Sasquatch.

We're blessed with the muscles and brawn.
We cultivate stashes of porn.
The world is our toilet,
please dont try and spoil it,
with perpetual nagging and scorn.

You claim we know nothing of pain.
Whilst driving hot blades through our brain.
You generate life,
but copious strife,
and render our gender insane.

So please just 5 minutes of peace
From your voice just a fleeting release,
we'll do as you say
if the pain goes away
make it stop, make it end, let it cease.

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Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3559 comments posted) 18th August 2006

Blimey, this is spat is bringing out the poet in all of us. I'll bet this is your first posting in this forum too.
Well done for bringing a touch of the surreal into the proeceedings. Your heartfelt and futile plea has been noted, Sassie.

interesting fauna and fungi
Written by sasquatch (125 comments posted) 18th August 2006

Hi BBS

im a poet,
and i didnt even..realise.

is about the most pony gag available at this stage.

Yes my first outing round these parts, the boundries blur. As you point out 'futile' is the operative word.

Sasquatch

Hi Susquatch
Written by jean.day (2361 comments posted) 19th August 2006

Great fun having all these poems flowing back and forth.

I enjoyed your poem.

...
Written by rilLie (328 comments posted) 20th August 2006

enjoyed it!

The Main Man
Written by givitsum (651 comments posted) 21st August 2006

I thought this little spat of verbal combat would be too irresistable for you not to muck in matey.

My compliments. One can almost feel your utter contempt and intolerance for the fairer sex oozing from your writing. Rarely before have I seen such feeling in your work; Yet here you clearly outline your innermost disrespect.

Well done.

Givitsum

Jibber Jabber
Written by sasquatch (125 comments posted) 28th August 2006

How do

Excuse the late response, i have been abroad in places with awful internet capability.

Thanks Jean and thanks Givitsum, and yes well spotted, i do indeed loathe the 'other gender'. But as has been pointed out elsewhere they do have occaisional uses.

My old Grandad had an hilarious and rather quaint old catchprhase he used to envoke when his wife was being slightly too verbal, i believe it went 'shut the f ck up you studpid b tch'.

Ahh, god bless the old sod.

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