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Dear Mr Blake
By patterjack
20 August 2006
Reference John Donne's The Flea and the Blake painting that can be found here http://www.phespirit.info/pictures/patchwork/p008.htm

Address: to William Blake on his paintingThe Ghost of a Flea

Dear sir , have you considered this could be

the ghost of that same predatory flea

that sucked the blood of the lady loved by John,

Now come un-Donne , and sacrificed upon

her purpled fingernail ? It now lives once

in his persuasive verse , and for the nonce

in your brief sketch that catches all the lust

for blood its soul contains . So now you must ,

driven by your vision and your art,

to others following its truth impart.

You paint the visceral . He, on the whole ,

With Jesuit metaphysics assailed her soul.

Your tempera on its panel can now respond

to what was lost : a fanciful marriage bond.

Two hundred years and still remembrance lingers;

A ghost enlivened by your skilful fingers .

Reviews
Superb.
Written by gerardconnolly (1186 comments posted) 20th August 2006
Thank you Brian for a thoughtful and delightfully executed piece of verse. I know both the works you refer to and your careful words do not flatter you. Of the two I suspect Donne would have understood the more. Blake was allegedly intolerant of interlopers, if my sources have it right. Mind he was it seems intolerant of just about everything likewise. Unlike Donne who appears almost his opposite in that respect. Lovely piece. Nice to see a bit of erudition bobbing about in this sea of banality. 
 
Well done. 
 
Saln!
No offence meant
Written by patterjack (1158 comments posted) 20th August 2006
I was not sure how many folk would know the Blake painting , though of course the Donne poem is a classic ,hence my note ,put there in no sense superciliously . 
 
Thanks for the kind words. 
 
I don't know how it turned into the above , but this poem was originally intended to be about what a sweet old Chinese lady may have been thinking as she did her five ( four minutes and twenty seconds each time ) circuits of the block in which I live , while I sat stationary , pedalling madly on my exercise bike . 
 
I must have been zenned into it , I think 
 
patterjack
From a philistine...
Written by Talisker (1315 comments posted) 21st August 2006
I know neither of the works referred to but, inspired by your artful verse, I shall seek them out. You are a skilled wordsmith indeed!!!  
 
Oli

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