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| By patterjack | ||
| 23 August 2006 | ||
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I am trying to keep this series with Peter as mundane as possible, nothing more than a framework. It may well make it all too dull . It is up to the villagers to be as curious as they want about him , and to say what they like about him but I would prefer , if I may ,when he meets one to have any conversation or incident involving him to be always from his point of view I will see to it that he meets anyone of the villagers who wishes to be met. If one does , perhaps he/she could contact me ahead re various relevant details I apologise for not knowing details of current prices etc -- If any details are wrong , tell me and I will correct them Back to Number One -- Chocolate biscuits , chocolate biscuits , Peter kept repeating to himself . Not that he needed to keep jogging his memory ; it just fitted the rhythm of his walk and the slap of the empty rucksack on his thigh . As he passed along the village main street he kept an eye out for a possible source of supply , and noted a small grocery shop not too far from the George residence. Crossing the road and taking a quick peek through the window of the s tore , he could see right at the back , shelves of biscuit packages that looked promising . Still , he thought it better to keep going for the moment to get his tee shirt. I might as well capitalise on the lady's offer straight away , he thought . If I don't get myself a job I might have to move on soon , and this is a good opportunity to get it mended . He considered his best tee shirt fondly . It had been with him a long time, but it was good quality and had worn well . Almost unadorned , no loud slogans on it but with just a small logo high on the left breast , it was a plain enough to do service even for a semi-formal evening . He moved swiftly up the path and used the key he had been given to let himself in. Ernie was nowhere to be seen , so Peter assumed that he was out in the back shed , probably composing more poems . Not particularly desirous of hearing further performances of the Village Odes , Peter made his way quietly up the stairs to his new bedroom. Almost without thinking , having had experience of the like before , he checked to see whether anything had been disturbed . Everything was just as he had left it . Retrieving the shirt from the cupboard after laying his rucksack neatly at the foot of the bed , he moved out and down the stairs . There was still no sign of Ernie , so Peter set out for the grocery store . As he reached it he glanced up at the name above the door , and saw that it was called Alvedo's Grocery. The store smelled like every other small grocery store that Peter had been in . It was narrow and crowded with overflowing displays , which seemed to intensify the mixed odours of foods , smallgoods , tobacco and soaps that mingled there . Just to the left inside the door was a short counter with a cash register , and behind it stood a tall , stooped , grey haired man , with the dark skin of someone from the Indian subcontinent . -- Now he, thought Peter , could be the father of that pretty girl Jasmine in the bank . He smiled at the man and asked : -- Chocolate biscuits ? -- Down at the far end of that shelf , said the man , waving in that general direction. His voice was a pleasant baritone , and though he did not return Peter's smile , he did not seem unfriendly. Peter walked down the aisle between two sets of shelves and stopped to consider the biscuit selection . It was an easy choice . The blue packets of Hobnobs stood out boldly , and examining their statement of ingredients , he immediately recognised that they were just what he wanted. Taking two packets , one for the lady and one to keep in his room for any quick snack he might feel like , he carried them up to the counter and asked how much . -- One pound eighty , said the storekeeper, and after accepting a note from Peter he rang up the amount on the cash register , passing Peter his change . -- Thanks , said Peter breezily, I reckon I 'll enjoy these . A light smile crossed the storekeeper's face . -- They are my best seller , he said . And my wife loves them . Too much so , I think . -- Ah well , said Peter . It's good to keep the ladies happy . And he left the shop and strode up the street to the craft shop. Once again the silvery tinkle of the bell announced his entry and as before a head , this time with the hair bound up in a bandanna like arrangement , popped round the door . -- Hello again , said the lady . You've brought the shirt . -- Yes , said Peter , and I've brought these to go with the coffee you offered. Her eyes lit up . -- Hobnobs ! Oh , I dearly love Hobnobs ! -- They do seem popular . The grocer told me his wife loves them too . The lady looked at Peter in surprise . -- Alvedo said that ? My goodness , you must have a way with you ! Alvedo rarely says any more than to tell you the prices . It was Peter's turn to be surprised . -- Well . I hardly said more than two words to him ! -- Oh ? . There's a turn up , then . She headed for the back room . -- Have look around the shop while I put that coffee on . And by the way , if you fancy anything , I have a wrapping service . Peter moved slowly around the shop. There were numerous small tables , each with its own variety of craft goods . One held hand-made candles , another a selection of attractive coffee mugs , still another , some examples of leather work . Peter moved back to the mugs . -- You like those ? There came a question from round the door , where the lady was probably keeping an eye on him . -- Indeed I do . I especially like the pattern and the glaze on this one . He held it up for inspection. -- That's one of my own. I love that dark brown earthy colour myself . -- It's very like the colour that a friend of mine at home uses. She's a potter . -- Home ? And where would that be ? Peter laughed . -- You're the first to ask , but I would have thought you'd have picked me as an Australian . But I've never talked broad ocker , and I suppose travelling about has made me lose a bit of my accent . The smell of brewing coffee was creeping into the shop . -- Hang on , said the proprietress . Sit down over there and I'll bring the coffee out. Then you can tell me all about yourself .
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