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| Hard Knock Life | |
| By DustinBowcott | ||||||||
| 05 May 2005 | ||||||||
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This is a single scene from my film. The worker has just found out that his sister has been murdered. He goes to his boss for comfort little realising that he is in fact the killer. ext.. Construction Site--day Don is sitting at his desk, completing some paperwork when a knock at the door makes him lift his head and drop the pen. Don Come in. A young worker walks in and removes his safety helmet, twisting it in his hands after closing the door and arriving to stand in front of Don's desk. Don takes in the worker's distraught expression. Don Is everything alright son? It's not woman trouble is it? Because you've come to the right man if it is. The worker shakes his head negatively and seems barely able to hold back the tears. Worker I've only just found out Gov. On my mobile. Don What? Worker It's my sister. She's been found... Don sits back in his chair waiting for the worker to finish.
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Worker Been found(pause)dead, she's been found dead. The worker bursts into tears and Don stands to put a comforting arm around his shoulder and helps ease him into the chair. Don There we go mate, just you have a seat there. I'll get you a drink. Don opens up the bottom drawer of the filing cabinet, which is empty apart from the scotch and two crystal glasses that he pulls out. Worker I just can't get my head round it. She was only sixteen, Gov. Don Don. Call me Don. Don places the glasses down onto the desk and fills them both with scotch. The worker picks up his glass and finishes half of it in one go, breathing out lingeringly as the burn hits his chest. Don Just take your time son. Worker I need some time off Gov, er Don. Don Of course lad. You're obviously in a certain amount of stress and I understand that you might want to keep some of the details to yourself. I've got your home phone number? Worker Yes Gov. Don Good. Take as long as you need. All I ask is that you keep me as informed as possible. Worker finishes off the rest of his scotch and sits cradling the glass Don Refill son? Worker has barely begun to nod his acceptance when Don fills the glass while it is still in his hand. cut to
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