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Poetry
Soup
By Talisker
25 August 2006
Just a bit of fun. 

I never had soup with that woman!
My spoon never clinked in her bowl!
You've incited my wroth,
It was never my broth,
That dripped on her skirt!
Bless my soul!


I never had soup with that woman!
Though admit I was tempted to dip,
My crust for a taste,
In a personal place,
And to fall to my knees,
For a sip.


I never had soup with that woman!
Homemade is always the best!
Though I did dip my tongue,
In her fine egg fu yung,
And believe me,
It passed every test!


 

Reviews
Ooo er
Written by Phil (6632 comments posted) 25th August 2006
I've never had soup with THAT woman! 
But her puddings, the best there have been. 
Her dumplings are fine, 
I wish they were mine 
To eat with some custard 
And cream. 
 
A good, silly read, Phil. 

Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 25th August 2006
I NEVER had soup with that woman, 
Although I know many that did. 
They went in for a bite 
And came out with a fright 
All covered in yoghurt 
And spinach 
 
Ditto 
 
Elli 
 
 

Written by oxy (28 comments posted) 25th August 2006
I never had soup with that woman 
but she did make a very nice stew 
her legs were just fine 
her breasts quite divine 
but her backside  
I found hard to chew.
well done one and all
Written by Leo (573 comments posted) 26th August 2006
where can i meet his woman??? 
 
great stuff talisker
HI Talisker
Written by jean.day (2257 comments posted) 29th August 2006
Great fun reading your poem, with all the inuendo. It reads easily and does all that poems should do. I enjoyed it.

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