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| By brook_rivers | ||||||||||
| 27 August 2006 | ||||||||||
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A rough draft here. Would like some opinions on the following: Should I keep the line : And forsake another Is the form and style of the last few paragraphs feesible to the rest of the poem? thank you!!! Brook x Here I wander Aimlessly Without any sense Of direction Trapped in a wood Of forked paths And roads not taken Here I wander Aimlessly Without guidance Or protection Dazzled by the many Realms of choice That present themselves to me Here I wander Aimlessly I venture along one course And then another Always retreating Afraid at what I might discover Should I continue And forsake another Here I wander Aimlessly Perhaps destined To be the eternal wanderer? Won’t someone please take my hand And show me the way? A resounding silence No; that’s down to me.
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