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A New Job and A Warning
By patterjack
31 August 2006
Employment first up ! Nice lady , the owner of the Manor.

But does anybody have any idea of who is the elderly gentleman who has a briefcase and a Bentley ?

Any straightforward account of what goes on between him and Lady Helen , which will help to advance the plot in a serious fashion would be interesting to read !

BBS has laid claim ( with a very neat piece ) to Peter's pub encounter with Fred and the zanies .


A New Job and A Warning

-- We won't go upstairs at the moment , said Helen . I 've done a fair bit of cleaning up for myself because I have to live there . And we'll leave the far wing as well. It's locked up and it can stay that way till I have a lot more time.

She sounded a little impatient at the thought of the amount of effort that was going to be required.

-- Anyway , come through here.

She led him out of the back kitchen area and round to the front of the big central staircase . The entry hall , gloomy despite the fantail window above the door and the shafts of light that cut across the tile floor from the two big windows to either side of it , had internal doors leading out from either side .

Taking him through the nearest one , Helen explained:

-- This was the main dining hall , almost a banquet hall , don't you think ! The first owners must have thrown some big parties !

She cocked her head and looked up.

-- That chandelier must have cost a mint. And think of the candles it needs! Nobody seemed to want it electrified .

-- Oh surely it would be too good left as it is , said Peter . And I don't know all that much about furniture, but this stuff looks a lot better than what I've seen in some other actual heritage places I've visited . You know , back in Australia there's quite a good market for this style of furniture.

-- But , and he paused thoughtfully . It would be a real shame to spoil the whole set up by selling bits and pieces .

-- There's a lot of the same sort of thing in the far wing , said Helen . I might have to sacrifice a few to be able to keep the rest . Anyway , you can see that the drapes will have to be taken down and cleaned , and there are a few patches where the paint will need restoring .

-- Now come through here .

She led him into a less spacious , but still elegantly furnished room.

-- Withdrawing room , for the ladies to wait while the gentleman smoked and had their port .

There was a faint element of mockery in her voice .

-- And here is the other den for the gentlemen ... the billiard room .

Peter took in the massive , but somewhat worn , table , with the racks of cues and as well the locked gun cabinet , with its small selection of rifles and shotguns .

-- Another sort of retreat , said Helen , leading him into a room full of shelved books .

-- Do you feel like a little light reading ? she laughed.

-- In fact , if you're up to it , for one job I'd like these books taken down , dusted , and listed in some way . Big job , though. There's a lot of books.

-- Interesting , aid Peter , but I still would like to spend some time out in the gardens .

-- That will be the main job for you I think , said Helen . but there are a lot of jobs in here that'll need two people . Like moving furniture and so on . But what do you think . Interested ? I'll be honest , I can only pay you minimum wages.

She named a sum that was indeed rather low , but without hesitation Peter answered her.

-- I can live on that , if you'll throw in a main meal at lunchtime for free . I like the idea of working here for a while . Should be a good experience .

They shook hands on the deal , and Peter told her that he would start as soon as he got some working gear together .

She saw him to the door and he set off down the driveway .

As he got to the gates , he passed a fairly elderly man in a business suit and carrying a briefcase , who saluted him but did not stop to speak as he moved on up towards the house.

At the bottom of the lane , before the deep ruts began , was parked a modest Bentley , which Peter , fond of good cars , admired for a moment .

Then he proceeded down the street whistling to himself . Having the job meant he could settle down for a while , something he felt he would enjoy .

He stopped by Number One and poked his head round the door .

-- Got a job at the Manor , he called as Jane appeared.

-- Starting tomorrow . But I'll have to get some working gear . I'll drop in again when I get into the swing of things .

-- Well done , said Jane . Do that . I'd love to know more about the Lady and the Manor .

-- No problems , said Peter . But first I think I might celebrate with a beer at the pub.

-- Whoa there ! said Jane . You'd best come in for a minute first .

She sat him down by one of the tables , as he looked at her inquiringly .

-- Look , she said , I maybe shouldn't tell you this , but you're a nice young man and I wouldn't want to see you put upon. There's two or three scruffies who hang around the pub , and Fred is no better really. They all think it's terribly funny to put people they don't think will be staying here through what they call a comic routine . Two of them play it up as Mad Tom and Crazy Tom , and Fred goes along with it .

Peter pondered this revelation .

-- Thanks for the warning , he said . I'll still drop in there , but I'll know what to expect . It doesn't sound like the things our mob get up to in pubs at home , but I reckon I can handle it now that I've been warned .

-- I'm sure you'll be able to , said Jane . You can let me know how that turns out as well.

-- I will , promised Peter , and he set of to make his purchases and tryout the local pub .

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Explaination
Written by givitsum (651 comments posted) 31st August 2006
HI PJ. To find the origins of the Bentley owners, you'll have to scour back through the comedy history, to a brook rivers sketch called Fasten Your Seatbelts. You can't miss it, it must have about 50 reviews on it by now. And rightly so. It's a past POTW winner you know!!! 
 
I think the second reference was in the original two-part short story I did, called Village Of Great Writing. (short stories, around April 2006) In the second part, they got mentioned, but it was actually referring to their escapades in Brook's sketch. They have no other 'role' in Village history. I only put them in as thought it might make me look rather clever! 
 
Cheers 
 
GVTSM 
 
 
legal eagles
Written by patterjack (1435 comments posted) 1st September 2006
I was considering the gent as a possible lawyer type -- maybe finalising any concerns with the Lady of the Manor-- but I am not committed to it . The lead could branch out in dozens of directions. 
 
I can't find the sketch -- as yet  
 
patterjack

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