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Hi fengchi....
Written by kevg (45 comments posted) 31st August 2006 |
....I thought I would have a read of your poem and be the first to leave a comment. I'm not sure whether I missed something or not, but I couldn't understand the poetry, many of the lines seemed bizarre to me:
'I fiery need your kiss'.
I guess by your name that English is perhaps not your primary language, and this might perhaps explain why I had difficulty interpreting the poem.
Thanks for sharing, keep writing!
KevG |
Sorry...
Written by Phil (7008 comments posted) 31st August 2006 |
...am I missing something? I didn't really follow this too well. I often miss the point with poetry, but I'm not even close on this one. Maybe something went wrong in the copy and paste process?
Thanks
Phil |
Possibly...
Written by patterjack (1435 comments posted) 31st August 2006 |
... witten in the author's own language and translated into English via Babelfish or the like ?
I can translate the emotional objective correlatives here -- but the language is , I fear , close to Dada-ism .
patterjack |
It it MANGO?!!!....
Written by gerardconnolly (1186 comments posted) 31st August 2006 |
Awesome!!! Are you MangoTheChutneyMan in disguise?
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I'm taken
Written by patterjack (1435 comments posted) 1st September 2006 |
Okay -- so I am weird in my tastes , but this work is exerting a fascination upon me.
Those last three lines ! ! aspire for your gurgitation ... ! What more could one aspire for?
Too much ! too much ! I must suspire ere I expire !
patterjack
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Mesmerising...
Written by ellipinnock (1795 comments posted) 1st September 2006 |
Fascinatingly bizarre...I think if I read this any more times my brain is going to implode. REally would like ot know is this has been translated from the author's native tongue?
Elli |
Excuse typos
Written by ellipinnock (1795 comments posted) 1st September 2006 |
| Brain tied in knots |
Tiwanese twaddle
Written by gerardconnolly (1186 comments posted) 1st September 2006 |
You and me both, Ellie.
I think the real hoot of this piece of Tiwanese twaddle is the number of otherwise sentient beings it has tied up trying to take it seriously[Myself included]. I've posted my conclusion. The real clue to this is in my opinion in the title...
Slan!! |
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Written by rilLie (329 comments posted) 1st September 2006 |
i didn't understand it very much, but thanks for sharing.
-rilLie
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I have fitted an alarm in my atrium!!
Written by Talisker (1336 comments posted) 1st September 2006 |
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Great
Written by givitsum (651 comments posted) 1st September 2006 |
Wonderful lurid feeling about his story my friend. I liked how recessive without usual nostalgic overtures under wind of the thoughts... quite indulge.
Beast Regards
GIVITSUM |
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