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| Forgive me , fengchi | |
| By patterjack | ||||||||||||||
| 01 September 2006 | ||||||||||||||
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I am sticking my neck out , by rewriting another person's poem. I speak no oriental language , and I am only guessing at the spirit of the poem . Indeed , I have found that while writing this I could have written another version that almost diectly contradicts the spirit of this one. If I am entirely off-beam , I apologise, but what a great exercise it was. Secretly I stole into your heart caressing the restless spirit I find there. I have a fierce desire for your kisses and you need my kisses in return Your almost half closed eyes betray the honeyed sweetness and your stillness brings the tears that wash away my smile. As I kiss you , my trembling lips feed drunkenly on yours. Your embrace enfolds my whole body, My need is for you to swallow me up. Your long hair floats in the wind ; my greed for its scent is satisfied.
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