Great Writing - Home > Poetry > I'd have been the same
READING ROOM
Great Writing - Home
Read and review others' work
Articles on writing
Advice from the community
COMMUNITY
Talk to others in the forums
Events and Competitions
GW News
ABOUT GREAT WRITING
All About Us
Contact Us
WORK AWAITING REVIEW
GW IS...
Great Writing creative writing community is designed to prompt ideas and provide inspiration and motivation within aspiring and amateur authors. Whatever your topic; from love poetry to Doctor Who or Harry Potter fan fiction, Great Writing's online writing group is where you can make new friends and improve your creative writing.
WHO'S ONLINE
We have 2048 guests online and 6 members online
Poetry
I'd have been the same
By Talisker
04 September 2006
This is a poor tribute I wrote at the time of George Best's death.


You kicked a ball before you walked,
A bonnie child of Belfast stock,
You learned to dribble, pass and block,
Many were the same.
 

You took your football to your bed,
No need for cuddles, toys or Ted,
You hugged tight to your dreams instead,
I wish I’d been the same.
 

Your waking hours were filled with sport,
A gentle, modest, honest sort,
No need for trainers to exhort,
Few were the same.
 

When Busby called your day arrived,
Beneath his gentle wing you thrived,
Became the greatest player alive,
None could be the same.
 

You dazzled with your talents bright,
Like Borealis’s flitting light,
Which flickers gay then fades to night,
You were the same.
 

Fame came too soon beloved George,
When tempted serpent’s fruit to gorge,
Succumbed to many a foolish urge,
I’d have been the same.
 

Farewell sweet George the girls and wine,
Could ne’er obscure your skills divine,
True immortality is thine,
There’ll never come the same.
 

 

(A poor tribute by Oliver Lodge)

Reviews

Written by kyoke_gan (1 comments posted) 4th September 2006
good masterpiece .Keep this up!enjoy reading...thank u:)
Too young?
Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 4th September 2006
What happened then?
Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 4th September 2006
Sorry, I somehow managed to post a blank review. It must be catching, take a look at Cookie's posts. 
 
Too young: 
 
I'm a bit too young to appreciate George as I didn't really tune into sport until I was about ten when we got our first reliable telly. I think by then (c1977) he'd gone off to the States. 
 
Back to the poem - your admiration shines through. You build him up, recognise his all too human failings, but don't knock him down. 
 
All the best (no pun) 
 
Phil.

Written by dakota (2 comments posted) 4th September 2006
How does one use talent to do justice to that of another? You've done a damn good job - it's honest without being sycophantic or (at the other extreme) slating him. 
 
I like the repetitive effect of the last line in each verse - it provides a strong structure to each verse and add poignancy to your ultimate line. 
 
This is a really good piece of work :)
Thank you all...
Written by Talisker (1326 comments posted) 4th September 2006
For your kind words. I saw him play for Hibernian when he retuned from USA (Phil i was born 1966). I loved the man - our lives would have been depleted without him. 
 
May flights of angels sing him to his rest. 
 
Oli.

   Only registered users can rate and write comments.
   Please login or register.

Powered by AkoComment 2.0!

 Previous item   Next item