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Mrs. Day writes to Lady Nascent
By jean.day
04 September 2006
Having finished theday’s work and gone back to her home, Mrs. Day thought long and hard about how she was going to convey her suspicions to Lady Nascent. She could of course just walk up to the Manor and ask to see her and tell her privately. But she was really rather frightened of this new Lady Nascent – nothing at all like her sweet gentle mother. So the next best option seemed to be to write her a letter. So Mrs. Day went to her writing desk, took out a sheet of stationery and took her pen.

“September 4th

Dear Lady Nascent,

I am writing to you because I feel that you should know something which might have an effect on your life in the near future.  You may tell me to mind my own business, and if that is the case, I will do so.

As you know there is a stranger in the village, Peter Jack, he calls himself. I understand that he is now working for you, which of course is your business, and nothing to do with me. If you feel he is all right, then I will trust your judgement. However, when I first saw him I could not help but see in him the spitting image of your dear departed father, Lord Nascent. As you know I have been living in this village all my life, and when I was a young girl, many of my friends and I were very friendly with your father, who of course at that time was young, handsome and very attractive. He would dance with us at the village events, and if I might be so bold as to add, on occasion, he would take liberties with some of us. Not that I let him do it with me, mind you.  I don’t want to point a finger at any individuals, as some of them and their families are still now living in the village, but I certainly know of at least three girls who had a long break from the village, staying with relatives, if you know what I mean.

So what I am now thinking is this. One of those girls, or perhaps all of them, had babies which were subsequently adopted. Maybe one of those babies was adopted by people who then moved to Australia. Maybe this so called Peter Jack is in fact your half brother. Do you not think it strange that he picked this of all the villages in England to visit? Do you know think it strange that he chose to look for work on your estate? My thought it that he might come forward with this information and try to pressure you into sharing your inheritance with him. Or even still, with him possibly being the older of you two, and a male, perhaps he thinks he has a right to take over the property rather than you.

In any case, I felt it was my duty to tell you my thoughts on this matter. I think to be forewarned is to be forearmed.

Yours sincerely,

Mrs. Jean Day

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Interesting
Written by patterjack (1435 comments posted) 4th September 2006
No doubt Lady Nascent will look closely at Peter. This may lead to interesting inter-reactions , with a variety of developments . 
 
As a friend of Peter's , I can however say quite definitely that he has no idea of any relationship , and that his coming to the village was governed by his Canadian friend's choice . 
 
But life is full of strange coincidences . See the italicised paragraph of Dondingalong Neighbours : Bob and Jane  
re the block opposite our own . :grin  
 
patterjack 
 
Glad to see you in the village. You have a fondness for the epistolary style ?

Written by brook_rivers (486 comments posted) 5th September 2006
WELL DONE JEAN! What a story line! glad you have rejoined us! 
 
i think your letter may have worked better in the form of a telephone call but apart from that brilliant! I wonder what helen nascents reaction will be & if the shrewd Mrs Days suspicions are correct. 
 
would love to know who the three females in the village are that succumbed to the Lords charms? perhaps harry rivers is an offspring?? but no doubt will find out soon.......!
Thanks Brook
Written by jean.day (2387 comments posted) 6th September 2006
I am much more a letter person than a telelphone one, so I expect she was too.  
 
I'm rather hoping somebody else will write the story about Lady Nascent and her reaction to getting the letter. She may well choose to ignore it and not say anything.

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