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Tony
By Ostara
10 May 2005

This will eventually be part of something larger, although I don't want to say exactly what, as it hasn't fully developed yet and I want you to read this without any pre-requisites.

Some good, honest crit would be welcome - this is the first draft, but don't be afraid to be a little rough! :)


Tony's alarm woke him at eight o'clock Thursday evening. He got up immediately and went for a shower. The water was surprisingly cold and ran out before he was finished rinsing. He supposed that the woman in 16C had been over enthusiastic in the bath again. He wondered if she used the vanilla scented oils this time; their smell seemed to permeate the whole building when she did, although he didn't mind that much. Drying himself, and then the shower cubicle, Tony followed his daily routine to the letter. Going back into the main room of his bed-sit he lit a cigarette and looked out of his tiny fourth-floor window. It was still light out, despite the heavy clouds and tall buildings. Not that he minded the dark; no, most of Tony's world was dark, but he liked it that way. He regards the darkness as a friend, a shield.

The streets below his building were quiet - there was nobody to look up and see Tony flick his cigarette butt into the air and watch it sail to earth a few feet from his front door.He disappeared from the window into the room; he would allow himself half an hour to relax before he prepared to leave. Flicking on the television he cursed as nothing happened. He tried the lights. Nothing. ‘Great' he thought ‘power's out'. This was happening way too often lately. In the top drawer of his dresser Tony found a notepad and pen; he wrote a short but very succinct letter to his landlord and put it by the door. Not that it would make much difference - the landlord was rarely around, and when he was available he was all smiles and promises. Tony had met his type before.

Tony's bookshelf was crammed: Science fiction jostled for space with historical sagas; swashbuckling adventures vied for attention with travel journals. A good read could pass the time better than any program on T.V. anyway. A choice selection and a comfy chair engaged him for the next 27 minutes, at which time he closed the book carefully and replaced it on the shelf. Time to get ready. Tony turned to face his neatly pressed uniform hanging on the wardrobe door. He liked his uniform, all blue and grey; it gave him a feeling of power, control. When Tony put on his uniform he grew as a person. Today, because of his earlier setback, he took particular care over his tie and polished his buttons till they shone. He did not bother to look in the mirror. He picked up his torch, events book, baton and large bunch of keys and made his way down to the street.It was a very short walk to work and he didn't encounter anyone on the way. It wasn't exactly a residential area though. Everyone on a day shift had long since gone home. As he walked up the driveway Tony hoped there was power on the site - he could really do with a cuppa. Unlocking the door to his office took three separate keys and an alarm deactivation. Not that there was anything in this particular port-a-cabin that was worth stealing, but it was inside the perimeter and therefore ultra-protected. Tony liked feeling protected. He always locked himself in, although for health and safety reasons he wasn't supposed to. Tonight was no different. The alarm was operated by a backup generator and so was one hundred percent reliable. Unlike his landlord, Tony thought with a sneer. The general power in the cabin was also out, so he bypassed a few security settings and connected himself to the generator. At last - a cup of tea.

Brew in hand Tony began his checks. No breeches of security in twenty-six days, and that little incident had been on his day off. Cameras active. He ran a full sweep of the complex and found nothing unusual. Some of the labs seemed a little messy though - those guys were normally fastidious about cleaning and storing their equipment after use. ‘Not his problem' he told himself firmly - the night cleaners start in an hour, they can take care of it.

Picking up the visitors book Tony opened the computer program to log recent activity and began entering the date when suddenly he slammed his mug down onto the desk slopping tea over the rim. He let out a long stream of expletives and threw the book at the wall. Fists clenched he struggled to regain composure. It doesn't matter, just start from the beginning. Tony stood up and walked to the door. He paused, knocked twice then turned around and walked back into the room. Pouring what was left in his mug down the sink he made a fresh cup and selected two bourbons to go with it. ‘Right' he muttered to himself as he sat ‘security checks, completed and logged. Cameras operational and sweeping; fire alarms systems operational on backup generators; visitors log has no entries for the past three days'. He described each action as he completed it, frowning at the last one. Double checking the book against the computer files Tony pondered the reasons for the site having no visitors in that amount of time. He couldn't think of a single one. This place was always operational. Even on Sundays someone usually had business here. Had someone not bothered signing in? Tony took out his events book and wrote neatly on the first clean page: ‘The site has had no visitors between 8:46am Monday and 9:17pm Thursday. This is highly unusual'. Closing the book Tony placed it, and the pen to one side. He felt an irrational urge to go and explore the complex, but it was nearly time for the bi-hourly review. He drained his mug and ran another scan of the alarm system. All present and correct. Satisfied he got up, took his mug to the sink and washed it. He didn't leave it to drain; instead he took a clean tea towel and dried it, putting it back in the cupboard marked ‘Tony'. He turned back to the desk and frowned. How could he have missed the tea spilled on the coaster? Stupid, stupid. Quickly he mopped up the offending tea with a piece of kitchen roll and threw it away. He checked the clock - 9:34pm. Time enough for one more check of the alarms before the review. He did both, then put his computer on standby, picked up his jacket, torch and baton and unlocked the door. Once outside, triple lock in place and alarm set, Tony looked around him and gave an involuntary shudder. He was being reckless, he knew that, but it excited him. There was something out there and he was determined to see it.

His pace was brisk as he approached the main doors. Of course they were locked. Tony had keys but he didn't use them; he walked round to the service entrance and paused. It was awfully quiet here and he wondered if it was always like that. Had he just never noticed? His face, full of concentration reflected back at him via the glass panel in the door. He turned away quickly and let himself into the building. Once inside the feeling of disquiet grew, but he tried to shrug it off. He was acting out of character today; it was only to be expected that he would feel uncomfortable about it. It was kind of eyrie though, he allowed himself to admit, the way his footsteps echoed up and down the hall. They seemed to run away from him, then speed back towards him, mocking him, urging him to walk faster, louder, shout back, talk to me. ‘Hello' he called? ‘Is anyone there?' How silly - he knew there was no-one there. Tony tightened his grip on his baton and felt ashamed he was grateful for the reassurance it gave. It really did feel strange being inside the building, but while he was here he might as well do a proper survey.

Tony strode purposefully towards the ground floor labs. He knew the layout from hours of camera footage and didn't take one wrong turn. As soon as he reached the medi-lab he knew something was wrong. The door was ajar.To give himself time to think, Tony tried to recall the camera sweep he performed less than thirty minutes ago. Was the door open then? He couldn't be sure. He didn't even know if this door could be seen from the camera in question. Commanding his footsteps to silence he slid forward and peered through the sliver of a gap into the room. Far from the untidiness he had seen on camera the room was wrecked. What could have done this? Fear crept into Tony's heart as he wondered who was responsible and if they were still here. He looked again at the lab - no, the mess was at least a few days old. This was his fault; he should have kept a closer watch on the building. Backing away he considered his options: go back to the safety of his office and continue scanning or find out what had been done to the other labs. He chose to go on.

Reviews
Ok, I am interested......
Written by spiderbaby49 (137 comments posted) 10th May 2005
there are a few points I'd like to go over with you but I am going to read it a few times first. 
 
Why have you double entered all the paragraphs though. Is this just a formatting error or do you have a cunning plan? 
 
spidey
paragraphs
Written by Ostara (61 comments posted) 11th May 2005
I find it dificult to read block text on a screen without my eyes going fuzzy! lol, a few spaces helps break it up for me, but it has nothing whatsoever to do with the story :) 
 
Don't be afrais to be brutal :p

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