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When All The Small Things Count
By CB:)
05 September 2006
This is just a really short little poem that's kinda sweet, so enjoy! Laughing


Small sighs,
The silent wish in your heart.
Hoping for the day,
When all the small things count.
For the day when dreams become more,
More than just the hopes you hide,
Behind your eyes in the night,
While you lie,
Lost in your own imagination.
Dreaming of the day,
When all the small things count.

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excellent!
Written by rilLie (327 comments posted) 5th September 2006
i liked this poem very much. :) 
keep writing! 
 
-rilLie 
 
0_o
Small things...
Written by Talisker (1328 comments posted) 6th September 2006
Here I am, peering desolately into my flannel jammy bottoms, dreaming of the day when all the small things count... 
 
Oli

Written by rheavee (13 comments posted) 17th September 2006
Wish I could always take notice of small things... 
 
Poignant! Please do write more :roll
Small things don't have to be insignifi
Written by Star-Light (13 comments posted) 30th September 2006
I really enjoyed this poem. The flow is great and it shows you that you have a definite talent for writing! Keep it up! :)

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