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Poppety One and Poppety Two |
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By Talisker
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05 September 2006 |
I wrote this for my "children" - two wee West Highland White Terriers (Or should that be terrors?) Poppety One and Poppety Two,
Poppety Three lives in the zoo,
In the polar bear enclosure,
Its so high she can't get over!
Keeper thinks she is a bear!
Perhaps she is, should you be there?
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Written by Phil (7009 comments posted) 5th September 2006 | Read your children's poems Talisker. Enjoyed them both, preferred this one. I just like its sense of fun. You could be just as easily be writing this for children with two legs.
Phil. |
Written by ellipinnock (1795 comments posted) 7th September 2006 | Short and sweet, well done
Elli |
Written by Gill21 (566 comments posted) 7th September 2006 | is very sweet. However should you have written this for children i would say far too simple. I don't think this would capture their attention at all. Sure your dogs will appreciate the sentiment however!
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Written by sueflu (18 comments posted) 13th October 2006 | Is this a poem for.......what was that word you used in that review? Of course not! It's a fun, simple poem. Children can enjoy simple poetry. When they are first learning poetry, they love funny sounding words like --poppety! Just FYI--line three and four do not exactly rhyme. I've heard that's important in rhyming poems.
But I liked it! | FROM BONNIE
Written by Josie (2849 comments posted) 11th November 2006 | | I am Bonnie, Josie's grandaughter. Your poem made me laugh and it was brilliant. LOL I thought it was like a song. It's not far too simple, and I am 8 years old and really loved it. | Hello Bonnie!
Written by Talisker (1336 comments posted) 12th November 2006 | Thank you for reading my Poppety poem. I'm so happy you liked it! I'll send your grandmother a PM to thank you!
Oli |
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