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Where do I go from here?
By luvccritters2
11 May 2005

Thoughts about a broken relationship?


Where do I go from here,

now that there's no more tears?

So much deception and hurtful lies,

no longer the angel in your eyes.

I once thought the answer clear.

I was the one you held dear.

But now its clear to see,

your no longer in awe of me.

The cycle of pain once more begins.

As I forgive you; yet again.

Should I do it one more time?

Will you finally be all mine?

Can you love just me only?

Is my future cold and lonely?

Tell me, where do I go from here?

Oh hell, I'll just have another beer.

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Written by kevinrobson73 (441 comments posted) 12th May 2005
well structured 
you told it well 
"pain2 might be a better rhyme for again if you re-work that line

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