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By JourneyAtNight
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10 September 2006 |
just a little haiku about my favourite season. E xxx Fluttering Downwards
From its Family of Fire,
Is an Autumn Leaf. |
Written by Phil (7007 comments posted) 10th September 2006 | What I like about this is that it doesn't sound like a haiku. Also liked the alliteration. Really liked the idea of a 'family of fire.' Phil. | Written by ellipinnock (1795 comments posted) 11th September 2006 | Yes, I like family of fire too. Nice and simple. Well done Elli |
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