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Dondingalong Neighbours. 3 . The Outer Dwellers
By patterjack
11 September 2006
Around the surrounding blocks

Dondingalong Neighbours. 3 . The Outer Dwellers

It is impossible to live on a ten hectare block along a country road without having contact with more than the absolutely immediate neighbours . Merely passing along the road was often enough to have someone who was working on their property look up , wave , watch as you passed , and then get back to their task .

And the converse was true , of course . My orchard was only a metre or two downslope from the road , and while I was there , as I was so often , I would see neighbours passing , and at times they would stop their cars to chat , or to simply enquire if there was something we needed in town.

One one occasion , returning from town in the old Corona I had inherited from my father , I heard a tremendous bang . Fortunately I had learnt ( unlike some of the permanent dwellers further out along the road ) to take it very easily on the dangerous curves , so the fact that a rear tyre had blown out did not put me in any danger .

Nevertheless , it was a bad spot to have a tyre burst , as it was on a slope with a blind curve ahead giving no view of my plight to oncoming vehicles . At the same time , the edge of the road was not the easiest spot on which to set a jack to change the wheel.

The noise that the bursting tyre made had echoed for a long distance , and within moments , there were three men coming from different sides of the road to offer help . They had thought I had run into a tree or something equally disastrous and told me they were quite relieved that there was no injured body to cope with .

Almost before I knew it one had produced a baulk of timber to prevent the car from rolling when it was jacked up , and another took the jack from me and with great expertise had the wheel off and the spare on in its place . I was not at all loath to allow this as I was dressed in town clothes , while they were in workmen's clothing , and the job in the dust was not conducive to sartorial elegance . They would accept nothing for the help , though in the circumstance I am sure that if I had had a cold beer in the boot they would have accepted that with pleasure.

The least friendly of the neighbours within a two kilometre radius was very chary about allowing people onto his property , as I discovered when I was trying to find the owner of the injured horse that had strayed onto my block. He informed me in no uncertain terms , despite the legitimacy of my appearing on his property , that visitors were not welcome . I later found that he no doubt had good reason for reclusivity -- I read in the local paper of his arrest for the second time , and his subsequent gaoling , for the growing of marihuana .

He was not the only grower in the district . In fact , out in the forestry areas , it was quite an industry among the alternative life style dwellers . One property owner within a close distance of us was , I gather , permanently stoned . So much so , in fact , that he fell from his tractor/mower , doing severe damage to a leg and losing a very important piece of anatomy . I did not know him well , but I hope that his condition desensitised him to any pain.

Often I would see a middle aged couple exercising , she jogging along and he riding slowly beside her on a bike . They w ere both very pleasant people and often rested for a while to chat . He was a retired journalist with the perhaps appropriate name of Shakespeare. If there was a property I might have been willing to trade for my own block , they owned it. It was on a higher spur that looked out over the valley , and had the most magnificent views along it in two directions. They too were a very hospitable couple , though they were a trifle too far away for frequent visiting .

One other pair , next to Bob's block , were establishing a rose farm.

On the side of the road opposite them was the block that , like mine , had been a part of the larger block from which mine was cut . There was another equivalent sized block between us , and I rarely went in their direction . They too had lots of citrus , selling it through a fruiterer in town.

The most interesting thing about them was that they owned peacocks , whose raucous cries could be annoying at times as they echoed through the still evening air .

There was great excitement when one of the birds found its way onto our property . The attempt to recapture it was for a long time frustrated by its flying into the top of a gum tree. I personally had never thought of peacocks as being other than earthbound , but I shall always remember the sight of it , tail feathers streaming behind it , making a magnificent streak of colour through the afternoon sunlight. It was finally coaxed down , and recaptured .

Finally , my neighbours who were closest to our house were a lovely pair , deserving of a part of this narrative entirely to themselves .

Reviews
Country life
Written by Fledermaus (3307 comments posted) 11th September 2006
A nice description of life in the modern country-side, with its friendly atmospere and newly invented industries. Some funny anectotes here.

Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 11th September 2006
Enjoyed this again. There's a very strong warm feeling that comes through in your writing. 
 
All the best, 
 
Phil.
thanks again
Written by patterjack (1196 comments posted) 11th September 2006
Some might believe that I am seeing the past through Nostalgia Brand rose-coloured spectacles -- but I don't think so .  
 
It would be hard to have other than warm feelings about the place and the people.  
 
I suppose there must have been some less than pleasant incidents , but they would have been very few and far between . Perhaps I had best include a couple if I can recall any properly , if only for the sake of balance . 
 
But they were such happy years !  
 
patterjack 
 
 
Ooh - I am enjoying what you have writte
Written by Josie (2785 comments posted) 13th October 2006
I'm getting down to slowly reading what you have been writing about, and how very interesting it is. I guess we all think that our humdrum lives might not be interesting to others, but your description of the area where you live and the people around you is excellent. I know from my three months in Australia, as I travelled alone, just how kind people were - and much more generous, I found, than English people. I think English people can be a bit "stand-off" until they know you, whereas the Australians step in and make you welcome from the start. But my experiences are another story. Yours are so very interesting. Well done!

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