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| Falling Emotion | |
| By mishmish | ||||||||
| 11 September 2006 | ||||||||
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The path of true love.... Comments always appreciated. The stones on the road Cut my hand But your angry words Cut me deeper The outpouring from my heart Was more than my wound You sat still Eyes staring, saying nothing A rigidness I’ve come to expect Keeping it all in While I explode An emotional thunderstorm Clearing the air But still you remain unaffected I prod and push too far Succinct sharpness Scythe through the moment On my feet Expletives rolling I stand by the door… Still no one could love you more And why did it happen? What did I say? To make you act this way It hasn’t been easy Mere mortals would crumble But you stood tall Unflinching, you persisted Finding resolution Where none existed I’m sorry I’m not perfect I shout, I curse Far from that pristine miss But I need to express In words, in voice Born like that With no other choice And that was what you loved At least, I thought so…
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