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| Depression | |
| By bloodange77 | ||||||||||||||||
| 12 September 2006 | ||||||||||||||||
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This peom was written because it's what i am feeling right now at this very moment. As I write it here. As I put into words the pain in my heart. As I am dying on the inside. Wasting away. And in depth it's really very true. I wish this doesn't happen to any of you whom shall read this. To me it's a river; A horrifying river. Deep and disasterous; Fast and monsterous. It happens quick; It takes you under. You swallow the water; Your lungs fills up. It starts to hurt; Even breathing comes with pain. There is no air pocket; There is no escape. It drags you down; Throws you against things. It's weight is braking you; As water crashes down on you. But it's not water; Not water at all. The debree of pain keeps you down; You're drowning in the waters of sorrow.
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