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| The Cure that could have been | |
| By CartoonScott | ||||
| 13 September 2006 | ||||
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Tale from the Old West (Going Down) Beneath his crushing feat he accepted his fast arriving fate And to the armies beat the meek fled on shaken feet But he’ll stand tall Retain some fleeting grace On the spot he will fall "Run" screamed a young soldier/ In case he didn’t know to do that "Stand your post,” shouted the General, weeping without crying as his heart cracked Lonely general on a busy hill, grabs the young soldier fleeing away from being a enemy kill "Stand your post!" he orders to the soul in his grasp "Why" cried the bewildered blond star boy, “ our chances are capped ”? The captain let go and stood alone He looked below Should he run, should he go, he just didn’t know The wind blew hard, The grass tickled the faces of the dead who picked the death tarot card Should they stand or run, hide or front They were doomed either way There was nowhere to cover Here coming was the devils lover Going down Going down now Going down Going down now In the distant, beneath the weeping heavens and the thunderous claps of sky Marched forward a force far more frightening than the feelings of death shy towards the small town herded a black wall of men Devil upon devil, swaying and drifting down the beautiful, heavenly peaceful glen His people only crime being in the way No means to fight the greed that the devil pays Going down Going down now Going down Going down now Such a lonely, lonely, lonely time Going down now Bernard the simple teacher made general A war stopped the destiny he had to fill A war blocked the road Bernard taught medicine as a life line He had the cure to ensure us a life fine But of course man has this way Of destroying the best of us every day every man, woman and child were called to arms, Bernard the simple teacher made general They hadn’t a chance, the men of the mystic west were champions of war and no small band would break a sweat in their goal of absolute rule Looking into a time that might have pasted I can see what Bernard would have been, Should have done if not man urge for the counter strike destruction to all the unique wonders it can create, A world where love just doesn’t conquer hate Just think how history may have been All those chances we should have seen Bernard lies dead He’s life changing cures never written, never read All he’s good flowing out his head as the blood turns the earth beauty red We’re going down
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