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Angels Are For Dummies
By Lex22
13 September 2006
 

Angels are for dummies
 

Where is she hiding here wings?

 

 I began to wonder

 

Are they detachable perhaps?

 

Can you see them only on a rainy summer night?

 

In the fall when I met her, is it a winter thing?

 

I am sure they were there

 

Have I gone blind?

 

A moment of silence if you please

 

For my heart has been torn out and now I can see

 

There was no love at all

 

Or an angel for me

Reviews

Written by Phil (7008 comments posted) 13th September 2006
Enjoyed this too. Nice idea, although the end was a litle predictable. 
 
Liked the self questioning and musing. 
 
Phil.
Like angels...
Written by Talisker (1336 comments posted) 14th September 2006
This one flew over my head...sorry. 
 
A bit "Robbie Williams" perhaps - and I happen to detest that cheeky chappy. 
 
oli 
 
I tip my hat to you ...
Written by Lex22 (4 comments posted) 14th September 2006
hmmmm....I like Robbie Williams.So Ill take yor insult  
and thank you as it's my favorite review thus far 8)

Written by lovewright (2 comments posted) 14th December 2006
;) pretty impressive I must say...

Written by Wordfairy (7 comments posted) 1st December 2008
I tripped over the typo in the first line at first and was sitting here thinking I didn't get it (Sorry!)  
 
Once I'd realised, I loved it and was left with a wry grin as I think everyone gets that feeling at some point in their life! 
 
Sandra

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