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A Father's Love (Haiku)
By tonyf
13 May 2005

Written in memory of the child my daughter used to be (she's now 18 going on 80)


My daughter's laughter

Water flowing over stones

Melancholy mine

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Written by Clodagh (29 comments posted) 18th May 2005
good piece, i really like it. i admire anyone who can write haikus- I cant do them at all, it's a hard little gem to master
Thanks
Written by tonyf (4 comments posted) 19th May 2005
Thanks, Clodagh. Having read your work, I feel especially pleased to have received a good review from you.

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