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By Lex22
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14 September 2006 |
True story........I once dated this girl for two days and trust me when I say there was no one night stand, no games and 100% no vibes felt between us. Yet she made this big hollywood deal when we decide to go our seperate ways. I am big into romance .....but this walked the line between crazy and.....no just crazy Sometimes I think about you Do you remember the fountain? I sometimes wonder if you do Where did you go when you left me standing in the rain? Have you found the love you were looking for that I could never provide? Did true love come your way? What about are time? Was it all for nothing! Then I get bored and go watch TV |
Written by Fledermaus (3281 comments posted) 14th September 2006 | You start of so nicely, with nice rhyming lines, but the last half seemed like prose rather than poetry. The last line is great. It is a nice contrast with the emotions that go before it. |
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