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Crazy Banana Love
By Lex22
14 September 2006
True story........I once dated this girl for two days and trust me when I say there was no one night stand, no games and 100% no vibes felt between us. Yet she made this big hollywood deal when we decide to go our seperate ways. I am big into romance .....but this walked the line between crazy and.....no just crazy

 

Sometimes I think about you

 

Do you remember the fountain?

 

I sometimes wonder if you do

 

Where did you go when you left me standing in the rain?

 

Have you found the love you were looking for that I could never provide?

 

Did true love come your way?

 

What about are time?

 

Was it all for nothing!

 

Then I get bored and go watch TV

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Written by Fledermaus (3281 comments posted) 14th September 2006
You start of so nicely, with nice rhyming lines, but the last half seemed like prose rather than poetry. 
The last line is great. It is a nice contrast with the emotions that go before it.

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