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Unfinished Tale: Chapter Three (Part Two)
By ellipinnock
14 September 2006
I'm really not sure about this chapter, it's been a bit like drawing blood from a stone! This is pretty much a pre-edited version so any comments would be appreciated.

Four pairs of eyes stare, unblinking at a pool hewn into the floor of a small chamber. The pool is full of a gelatinous liquid that gleams, ever so slightly, illuminating dark stone wall and casting shadows across the floor. A background murmur grows, out of silence, rattling discordantly off of the walls, vibrating the liquid which splashes steaming, corrosive droplets onto the floor. The noise grows and grows and grows until the chamber groans and shakes under the pressure. A film creeps slowly across the face of the liquid, thickens, tenses and cracks, jagged fault lines zig-zagging across the surface. Four pairs of hands, thin and ghostly pale in the dark, reach out and peel off the film with the gentlest of touches. Underneath liquid laps at the edges of the bowl, colour bleeding in as if from the stone itself. The colours swirl and mix and then, gradually, images form, shifting in and out of focus as the hum begins to rise again. Slowly Mahirl and Renarf appear in the pool, serpent tattoos glinting as they squat by a fire amidst ruins. They are chatting idly, relaxed yet watchful. The image becomes clearer, closer and the pair stiffen, suddenly alert,


'Mahirl...'


'Yes, I feel it too. They are coming. Close now' he grunts, panting slightly, eyes rolling until only a slit of white shows. An inhuman wail extends from deep within his throat, pitch rising and rising, beyond the reach of mortal ears. His body shudders and he speaks again, voice creaking as if he has forgotten how to give voice to his thoughts,

'We do not permit failure. This you should know by now. By all rights you should both be dead. Yet, in our clemency, we have decided to give you another chance. Find the girl. Trap her, follow her. We do not care how you do this. Force her to lead you to the Ranger. Do this successfully and you may yet survive.'


Mahirl crumples to the floor lying still and lifeless as the minutes pass. Renarf sits, motionless, watching and waiting. Several leaden minutes pass before Mahirl stirs, limbs twitching in the dust.


'Well. I guess we've got to find the girl, huh?' he smiles weakly, slumped on the ground.


'It would seem that way.'


'Then let us rest for a while. The Dream attack must begin at dawn. We have no other option.


 Jaris and Hel-nar had left Nathar as soon as possible after speaking with Talon and headed North into the mountains. They slept by day and travelled by night so as to avoid detection by agents of the Forgotten Ones. The horses were skittish and uncooperative, sensing that all was not well. They pressed on regardless-what other choice was there? At dawn they were riding through a small coppice when Hel-nar shuddered and stopped amongst the trees,


'Jaris. Jaris. Can you hear that?'


'Hear what?'


'Screaming, in the distance. It sounds like a child. We have to help. Come on.'


'There's no screaming, you're just tired. Now come on, we need a place to camp, the sun is rising fast.'


'I can here it. How can you just pretend that you can't? I'm going to find out what's happening. We can't ignore it. The child might be in trouble.'


She wheeled her black mare and set off out of the coppice. Jaris hesitated for a moment and then, concerned by her response to screaming only she could hear, he followed her out of the wood proceeding somewhat more cautiously.


Hel-nar could feel the screams, raw and visceral, growing louder and more insistent. She searched frantically, turning the mare this way and that, desperate to discover the source. Then she felt the familiar tug of the Dream, pulling her away from reality. She resisted, fiercely, driving her mind outwards towards the screams and somehow bending backwards and following the screams deep into the Dream. The mare stopped dead and she tumbled to the ground, landing in her desert city. Bewildered, she climbed to her feet, looking around for the source of the screams which, by now, were dwindling into sobs. She ran down an alley, turning left and right, narrowing as it went until she reached a brick wall; a dead end. In front of the wall sat a small child, scruffy and ill-kempt, sobbing as if its heart was about to break. She knelt down beside it, speaking softly,


'Hush now, what's wrong? Did someone hurt you? How did you end up here, in my city?'


The child stopped sobbing suddenly and stared at her in silence.


'Do you even know where you are?'


'Yes' the child answered,voice strangely sibilant in the silence,'But do you know where you are?'

'Of course I do. This is my construct after all.'

She paused, thoughtfully, the alley had seemed less than familiar somehow although she had not considered it to be important at the time. She turned slowly to gaze back up its twisting length and, to her surprise, found herself facing a blank, featureless wall.


'Shaloth's teeth!' she spun on her heel. 'What have you done? Where am I?' but the child had disappeared, mocking laughter drifting quietly into the distance. She was left in a manufactured chamber, barely large enough to lie down in. A sense of foreboding struck, who had tricked her? Seeing no way out and nothing to gain by wasting energy she simply sat down in a corner of the room to wait.


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