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| Love, Infatuation.. | |
| By Laura | ||||||||||||||
| 15 September 2006 | ||||||||||||||
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Something I wrote when I was heartbroken. Mind you that was a long time ago. Still thought I'd throw it out there. I'll warn you, it is very teenage "emo" writing, if i do say so myself. Pick away. Ta
Love, infatuation, unable to define, Choosing lust over love always seems the bottom line, A decision always regretted From the broken tears we are forced to cry So many willing to break apart, testify.
Forever scarred deep into your heart, Painted smile as your world falls apart, Insomnia taking its toll, you try so hard to give up, just fall.
It seems all you see, his eyes piercing deep into your soul, You chase him, but forget he is moving on, Now your chase has turned into a crawl Drowning in a river of your own.
Now that passion, that was once so deep Turned into but a distant stare, Watch as the blood begins to seep, And your heart that was stolen, without any care
Dressed in disguise, to fool the world you dread, Quiver and shaken, reminiscing of what was last said, The very last kiss, as your lips fell apart, You found the strength to run Try to leave behind your broken heart.
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