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Cosmic Relief
By JourneyAtNight
16 September 2006
Basically just about putting the past behind you and moving on with life.

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The world spins

Stars watching amused,

A twinkle in their eye.

Throw to them your thoughts, your hurt, your pain.

Watch it all disappear up into space so that

when we come back around again

it will be there lingering no more -

No need to duck,

Hold your head high

Move on

With the world.

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Written by Phil (6845 comments posted) 16th September 2006
If only life were so easy! 
 
Some nice ideas. I think this might have worked better for me had the stars thrown the troubles back and said, 'Get on with it; it's your life.' 
 
Perhaps I'm just a misery. 
 
Phil.

Written by JourneyAtNight (314 comments posted) 16th September 2006
Ha yes thats usually the case for me too, but I thought I might "cheese" it up a bit...there's no harm in dreaming! 
 
Cheers  
 
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