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EAT MY GENIUS!
By coolveggie85
16 September 2006
I came on to this site to get my poetry to a wider ordience and to cheer myself up after a particularly unpleasant fungal infection.  Your abuse has upset me so much that the fungal infection has returned and I may have to be hospitalised.  I hope you are pleased with yourselves!

Why do they mock me the tiny brained fools
Is it envy at my talent so big?
They tell me to listen, to follow the rules
But I tower above these thick pigs

I am a genius so don't try to deny
That I'm better than you and you know it
Don't tell me I'm rubbish I know it's a lie
Your opinion from your arse you can blow it

I am like Christ, I must suffer the blows
Because I know so much more than the others
Incredible poetry from my brain it just flows
And if you don't like it go **** your mothers


GOODBYE!

Reviews

Written by JourneyAtNight (314 comments posted) 16th September 2006
Ouch! well thats us told. 
 
You have a good flare I must say. I enjoy reading your work. 
 
Oh and hyrocortisone 2% cream should fix the fungal infection. Apply daily. 
 
All the best  
E xxx
Temper, temper!
Written by LynB (435 comments posted) 16th September 2006
Priceless! Comparing yourself to Christ now - well, that really is inexcusable! 
 
As for abuse, you can obviously dish it out, but can't take it! 
 
Sayonara - have a good life!
Fantastic
Written by Phil (6846 comments posted) 16th September 2006
Another great intro and the poem wasn't half bad this time.  
 
All the best, 
 
Phil.
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Written by rilLie (327 comments posted) 16th September 2006
isn't that a bit rude?

Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3452 comments posted) 17th September 2006
Actually that was quite humble and self-depricating for a poet. 
BBS
what's your problem girl?
Written by rheavee (13 comments posted) 17th September 2006
 
You can never be like Christ.... He writes better poetry...
LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL!
Written by JohnnyD (104 comments posted) 26th September 2006
As long as you know who you are 
Never care for the world 
Win people with your goodness 
Not Anger 
Remember always - Every 'NO' brings you closer to the 'YES'! 
Life is beautiful and you are beautiful in your own way just like others in the world!  
Enjoy your beauty sweetie! 
Happy Writing! 
 
Johnny D

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