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Little by little Part one
By MikeMorris
17 September 2006
Here's the latest bit of scribble.
Is it worth writing part two?
I don't know why it's come out in different sizes.Maybe that's life?
Mike

Eric always been able to spin a good yarn.

One of his earliest memories had been of playing hide and seek and, finding himself with another boy,he had whiled away the boring hiding time with a potted version of Oliver Twist. He had been taken to see the David Lean version by his gran.During reel changes he had eaten jam butties, wrapped in bread paper.Ice creams were too expensive for a widow in 1950.

Even then he had "improved" the story. When Sykes was being brought to bay and but before he suffered the accidental hangman's noose, Oliver had thrown an axe,which he just happened to have with him, as obviously Victorian boys did, and by a feat of dexterity worthy of any circus knife thrower,had struck Sykes between the shoulder blades.Thus Oliver played a more active part in the drama than even Dickens intended.

When his captive audience had later seen the film for himself, he had been annoyed at finding the story, though exciting, axeless.So annoyed in fact that he had come looking for Eric to physically demonstrate his disappointment.

Luckily,Eric's cousin, Mary, an almost adult 13 year old, had been with him at the this time and had saved him from the worst of what his first critic threatened.

"All this making up stories will get you into trouble, our Eric," Mary had said. How right she had been.

All through school it had been the same. Not for Eric the mundane

slow clock; when he arrived in class after morning prayers were over he had always either narrowly escaped death,or serious injury. Sometimes a milk horse had run amok. Or the lady next door had been struck down by some mysterious, near fatal, illness which only Eric had averted by his fleetness of foot at bringing the life saving Indian Brandee from Critchley's the herbalist.

So perhaps it was only to be expected that he would be drawn to the theatre as a vocation.

Well, maybe not the theatre, but The King’s Picture Drome on Stockport Old Road was the closest most people in Eric’s part of Manchester got to seeing their favourite actors.

And Eric made it possible. Granted, Mr. Knowles was the main projectionist. But Eric was his assistant. And an enthusiastic one. He loved his job and everything about it. The clatter of the projector was to him an accolade for the gods whose images he helped deify.
And if, possibly, he was too star struck, surely allowances could be made?

Granted there had been the embarassment of the Ava Gardner posters. And the less said about the Heddy Lamarr stills the better. Even if they had been only black and white.

But this time, this time……… Would even he be able to talk his way out of this? All his guile would be needed; all the skills he had honed on gullible friends and relations might not be enough to save him. Could he come up with a story to convince himself? For if he didn’t believe his version, how could he expect others to? And would his nerve hold?
As he made his way to the manager’s office he thought of himself as James Cagney, or maybe Gary Cooper. The words of the song, never truer than now, lay behind his thoughts, like an incessant refrain. “I do not know what fate awaits me…….I only know I must be brave….… “ Good old Frankie Laine. He knew how a Man felt.

Reviews

Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 17th September 2006
Certainly worth the second half. I want to know what he's done - and if you throw in a bit of detail about the posters and stills, I'm sure there's great scope for comedy there. Perhaps his boss will want to list his back catalogue of crimes to hold against him. 
 
 
Enjoyed it. 
 
Phil. 
Peerless.
Written by gerardconnolly (1186 comments posted) 17th September 2006
 
' I don't know why its come out in different sizes. Maybe that's life!! ' 
 
Peerless. Utterly peerless! 
 
GW Quote of the Month, Kenneth Williams Award Sepember winner : Mike Morris!! 
[You win the Woody44 Inflatable Doll!] 
 
Seriously Mike. Another lovely piece. Sorry about the flippancy. Phil is absolutely spot on correct. There is great scope for comedy here. And who better to exploit it. 
 
Slan!

Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3362 comments posted) 17th September 2006
You can't stop now,sweetie. That would be just like a man;lose interest half way through! 
Seriously I thought it was quirky and funny and worth the episode 
cheers 
BBS 
Ha ha..
Written by givitsum (651 comments posted) 17th September 2006
Another good one there Mike from Manchester. I agree with the others above, you should certainly continue with the second offering.  
 
Cheers 
 
Givitsum

Written by MikeMorris (106 comments posted) 18th September 2006
Many thanks from an old,and, I will admit, occasionally confused old man, to BBs, Phil and Givitsum. 
To a certain Mr. G. Connolly, may I remind him of the saying, "To the pure, all things are pure" 
;)  
Many thanks, Mike

Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 18th September 2006
All the same size for me :)  
And very enjoyable to, I would very much like to find out what the miscreant has done. 
I shall wait for the next bit! 
 
Elli

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