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Five Colors in Your Hair
By rilLie
17 September 2006
this was inspired by a song of the same title featured in Just My Luck, a Lindsay Lohan film. my ate (big sister) was watching it this morning, while i was off brooding on my homework and i just can't get the song out of my head! actually, i think this one relates to a fanfic i read. it's HP.. RLNT to be precise. hope you enjoy!

Heads turn as you pass by,

mouths drop as you walk on,

thoughts stricken by your purple hair,

as you glide on by, so strong.


I love the way you walk so nice

even though you are so clumsy.

The next day you have it pink and blue,

or sometimes just like Dipsy.


I love the way you toss your head,

when someone talks to you.

You make a show, though you never know,

when someone sees you too.


You never seem to notice

the looks, the silence in the air,

but you know, I've always been amazed,

with the five colors in your hair.

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Written by Fledermaus (3230 comments posted) 17th November 2007
Heheh... Reminds me of an Australian house-mate who during the short time she was in the Netherlands had had four different colouurs of hair: Pink, red, black with golden dots and purple...

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