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WAR WAR EVERYWHERE?

By JohnnyD

17 September 2006

I am a freelance journalist based in Bombay, India. I love to write poems in English, French and Hindi. I would love to have your views on my poems and would appreciate your honesty.

WAR WAR EVERYWHERE?

War war everywhere
Sign of peace
Oh, no where!

While they invade
For sake of peace
Mayhem spread
To make a gist

Peace is all
We all wish
But with war
Is there peace?

They sell supply
Arms to crush
In just, they claim
For one and all

Peace will prevail
While they always quote
Busy they are
Counting notes behind closed doors

History says
Oh, my peace!
Where did any one
Find it please?

War war everywhere
Sign of peace
Oh, no where!!!

Johnny D

War war everywhere
Sign of peace
Oh, no where!

While they invade
For sake of peace
Mayhem spread
To make a gist

Peace is all
We all wish
But with war
Is there peace?

They sell supply
Arms to crush
In just, they claim
For one and all

Peace will prevail
While they always quote
Busy they are
Counting notes behind closed doors

History says
Oh, my peace!
Where did any one
Find it please?

War war everywhere
Sign of peace
Oh, no where!!!

-- Johnny D

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I like your style
Written by coolveggie85 (7 comments posted) 17th September 2006

Johnny, especialy as english is not your first language. I have the same problem, I'm from Bolton. Keep up the good work but remember there are people on this site who envy those of us with talent.

War
Written by givitsum (651 comments posted) 18th September 2006

Hi JohnnyD.

I can understand the do-gooders asking for peace, but how does anyone know what a world of peace is like? When was the lalst time that there wasn't a war going on? It's like asking for a world without cockneys.

Anyway, welcome to GW.

Givitsum

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