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By Stephen_Normal
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14 May 2005 |
I was on the bus. "Wrote" it in my head at the time. Obituaries This woman next to me on the bus, strains to read the death notices - half expecting to see her own name |
Written by spiderbaby49 (137 comments posted) 20th May 2005 | Wow. Short but very punchy. If you had put 'old' woman it would have more impact, even!!!!
spidey | Short but sweet
Written by Leigh (226 comments posted) 19th April 2006 | Yes, like it!
I logged into this not quite knowing what to expect. It's quirky, and I like things like this that just sort of 'pop' into your head whilst you're in mundane situations like sitting on a bus. |
Written by IPFaulkner (83 comments posted) 1st June 2006 | Really good.
IPF |
Written by kitlovesmolly (3 comments posted) 31st July 2006 | Its a by the by comment but have you ever seen that sketch on Harry Enfield with the Old Gits reading obituaries?
They sit there reading through smugly "You're dead I'm not, you're dead, I'm not"
Just reminded me. But yours is much sadder with its feeling of surely life must offer me more than this? |
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