Great Writing - Home > Poetry > The Poetaster
READING ROOM
Great Writing - Home
Read and review others' work
Articles on writing
Advice from the community
COMMUNITY
Talk to others in the forums
Events and Competitions
GW News
ABOUT GREAT WRITING
All About Us
Contact Us
WORK AWAITING REVIEW
GW IS...
Great Writing creative writing community is designed to prompt ideas and provide inspiration and motivation within aspiring and amateur authors. Whatever your topic; from love poetry to Doctor Who or Harry Potter fan fiction, Great Writing's online writing group is where you can make new friends and improve your creative writing.
WHO'S ONLINE
We have 2060 guests online and 4 members online
Poetry
The Poetaster
By Talisker
18 September 2006
I suppose some would refer to it dryly as "writer's block". 

I'll away back under the duvet.

Oli.

I woke with the muse then It left,

Leaving me of its blessings bereft,

It was there then was gone,

Hope it comes back anon,

To inspire with its magical breath.

 

Meantime I must struggle along,

As each clumsy stanza goes wrong,

Each word oddly jarring,

Each angry line sparring,

Each rhyme where it shouldn’t belong.

 

For I cannot stop writing its true,

When I do I get ever so blue,

Hide under the covers,

Away from all others,

And all human contact eschew.

 

So I’ll wait for the daughters of Zeus,

My literary skills to unloose,

When they visit I’ll weep,

From their fountain drink deep,

Sweet poesy flowing, effuse.

 

‘Til then I’m a fraud, a poetaster,

My efforts poetic disaster,

Please excuse my poor posts,

And my humour morose,

I beg you don’t brand me a waster.

 

For when I recover my talents,

And regain my lyrical balance,

Your faith I’ll reward,

With my blessings restored,

I’ll rise once again to the challenge.

 

Oli (18/09/06)

Reviews

Written by ellipinnock (1786 comments posted) 18th September 2006
But are you truly suffering from writer's block if you can write about it? (6 stanzas worth to boot!) 
I particularly like the second stanza 
Too clever for your won good :) 
 
Elli

Written by Phil (6959 comments posted) 18th September 2006
I too particularly liked the second verse. Not bad at all for someone with nothing to write. 
 
(I still think you should have a go at the results of Five-a-Day. Chew over that - so to speak.) 
 
All the best, 
 
Phil. 
 
 
 

Written by devscribbler (10 comments posted) 19th September 2006
:)  
 
I agree Elli. You don't seem to be suffering from writer's block. If only the rest of us could write so well while we had the cramps....
wow...
Written by kprasanna (3 comments posted) 26th September 2006
If this poem was just testing , then u sre won our rewards.To good. Like ur humour

   Only registered users can rate and write comments.
   Please login or register.

Powered by AkoComment 2.0!

 Previous item   Next item