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Some Revelations
By patterjack
20 September 2006
Some Revelations

As she went in through the back door Helen stripped off her heavy gardening gloves and tossed them into an old half barrel that stood there.

-- Put the kettle on , Peter , after you've washed up. I have to nip upstairs .

Peter signified his assent with grunted okay , and moved to the sink to clean up his hands and then fill the kettle. By the time he had done so , Helen had returned , carrying a large cardboard box. Peter looked at her inquiringly but she shook her head and said:

-- Tea first .

She proceeded to make a strong brew .

Peter went to where he had left a small package and took out a half of a pack of biscuits.

-- I got these yesterday , he said.

-- I've been using them to bribe top line coffee out of Jane .

-- Jane ?

-- The craft shop owner. Like me , she has a thing for chocolate biscuits.We form a mutual Hob Nob Society .

-- What's she like ?

Peter broke into a broad grin.

-- That's funny . You know , that's exactly what she asked about you.

-- Oh yes ? There was touch of frost in the voice.

-- And just what did you tell her ?

-- Listen , said Peter .

-- You're my boss , right ?

And he emphasised the word boss.

-- I don't give away too many personal details in casual talk . Some about me but especially none about my employer. But you do have to recognise that the village is curious about you . And to my reckoning , it doesn't matter what I tell them , really. If I didn't give them some answers , they'd be making up a whole series of wild stories as to just why I was keeping my mouth shut. I'll just give people enough of the truth , because I'm damned if I'm going to lie about things , enough truth anyway to keep them happy and at the same time leave you your privacy .

-- What a principled young man you are !

-- I do my best ! he said huffily .

-- All right , all right ! I 'm not calling you a blabbermouth. Perhaps it's just as well the lot down there should get a reasonable idea of what I'm about , so I don't mind what you say , as long as you keep that forelock tugged .

-- Give over on the forelock ! exclaimed Peter.

-- And I don't think you need worry about what I've told anyone.

Helen looked at him appraisingly.

-- You know , I don't really think I do have to , she said.

-- Drink your tea , and then have a look at these .

She started to deal a whole lot of photographs out in a fan shape on the table.

-- I found these in the old lady's room .

She waited expectantly as Peter looked them over cursorily .

-- See anyone you know ?

Peter now picked up each photograph in turn and looked at it carefully.

-- Who's this young bloke with all the different girls ?

-- That , said Helen definitively , is the son of the old lady. I haven't worked it out in detail , but according to what I've been told he was apparently a distant cousin . Very distant. Even more distant now since he died . Drugs apparently . Now tell me -- does he remind you of anyone ?

-- No , said Peter .

-- Not even of yourself ?

-- Me ? Peter was incredulous .

-- He looks to be about my age -- he's got the same sort of hair , but crikey , you wouldn't mistake me for him in a month of Sundays .

-- Turn the photo over , said Helen . Do you recognise the woman, now ?

-- Good god , said Peter as he read the name on the back -- Jean Johnson.

-- Not the same name but it must be a young Mrs Day -- Jean Day.

-- I think my good cousin was a bit of a Casanova. If you look at the other photos , you'll find him there with rather a lot of the women of the village -- much older now of course . And he must have been an amateur photographer who developed his own shots , because you'll find a few pictures of young women in somewhat compromising positions and states of undress .

-- Dirty young bugger , said Peter . Who's this ?

And he turned over a rather revealing picture to read the name .

-- Doris . Doris who , I wonder ?

-- Present postmistress , was the laconic answer.

-- Not such a tempting female now ! She must have put it about a bit then. though ! But crikey , if you're ever really short of cash you could always sell these.

-- No way , said Helen sharply .

-- The past is the past and I don't intend to resurrect it . Oh well , with one exception perhaps . Remember , he was part of my family and I don't want his reputation made any worse than it already is .

-- Who's the exception ? asked Peter .

Silently , Helen handed over Mrs Day's letter .

-- I got this from Mrs Day .

Peter read the letter, looked at Helen , and read it again , more carefully. Finally he looked up from it and said :

-- And did you think this might be true ? Is that the reason for the cold shoulder yesterday and the questions today ?

-- Only partly , said Helen .

-- You see , I've had a visit from my solicitors and they're confident that I am the sole heir. Not only is the old lady's will sound , but they had a firm of investigators trace every possible link to her , and I 'm the nearest anyway . You couldn't even have been adopted so there was no chance of your challenging me . I just wanted to think a bit more about you and your being here. Make a complete judgement .

-- Yes, well I had to produce birth certificates and all that to prove I was patrial , said Peter somewhat belligerently .

-- I'd have found out anything dodgy then. So what are you going to do ? Am I fired ?

-- Don't be silly , said Helen .

-- Let me tell you what we , and I said we , will do.

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