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| Daily Train Ride | |
| By JourneyAtNight | ||||||
| 20 September 2006 | ||||||
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As the title may suggest, this is just about getting the train home after University every day, where I tend to let my mind wander, as I'm sure the rest of the passengers do too. I'm sure they all know me now as the strange girl who stares a lot. ![]() E x Burdened Train Rickety Chug, Filled With tried and tired minds Wet footprints Scattered and linking; Spheres of thought Overlapping; Events of the day Turning. Yet all aware Of watchful eyes. Umbarellas drip dripping; Cough Sniff Fidget. Businessman Pretending To read a crumpled newspaper Brow furrowed, Shirt creased, Head cramped with endless woes. A school boy Head phones blaring. Stubborn, Barricading The unjust world around him. Restless mother Face tinged pink, Panicking, Continuously hushing; The baby won't stop Crying. Young woman by the window Watching raindrops slowly Trickling with light. Only to be ripped away, a vicious wind screeching. A shared refuge for Reflection. It Halts. All thoughts are put away safely. Stepping off, Walking away, Leaving it Till tomorrow.
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