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Raj and his proud boast
By bardo
22 September 2006
There was a young lad called Raj
whose face was extremely large
his feet looked like pins
and his ankle were thin
though you should have seen how fat his "thingy" was.

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Written by LynB (435 comments posted) 21st September 2006
Oh go away!

Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 21st September 2006
What thingy?

Written by bardo (8 comments posted) 21st September 2006
His.. well you know.. "dangler"
too short and confusing.
Written by prodigy (22 comments posted) 29th June 2007
Ummmm . . . . Bardo I see that you're Indian like me. 
THIS POEM WAS CRAP!!

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