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Poetry
Lyn B
By bardo
22 September 2006
So you think I'm a waster dear Lyn B
with your Nazi approach to poetery
I'm not one of those yes men
with a quill up his bum
I'd rather write verse to a beautiful sun
but you leave me no choice
but to reply in talented voice
and wait for my death to be exonerated

Reviews

Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 21st September 2006
I'll leave Lyn to comment, but I suspect I'll agree wholeheartedly with all she might write. 
 
Phil. 
 
PS Lyn, I think this might be worse than the other two.
Not worth it, Phil!
Written by LynB (435 comments posted) 21st September 2006
I'm of the opinion that if you feed a stray dog, it keeps coming back, so I'm just ignoring him/her/it, and they'll go away! 
 
Anyway, does their mum know they're on the computer this late on a school night?

Written by bardo (8 comments posted) 21st September 2006
Oh you poor sad fools. Bardo is a genius and that's not just because he is my namesake.
It's just occurred to me...
Written by LynB (435 comments posted) 21st September 2006
The response above gave me a clue, and now I've seen this so-called genius's reponse to Lights Out, I'm convinced that this is coolveggie under another user name. 
 
Good God, she must think we're as daft as she is!

Written by JourneyAtNight (314 comments posted) 21st September 2006
oh dear GOD! how much more of this pathetic bull must we endure? 
 
Really sweetheart, get a hobby, one that doesn't involve crowding poetry boards and getting up our noses. 
 
It used to be entertainig, now its just annoying. Please take a hint. 
 
Esra

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