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Poetry
Empath
By Wolfie
23 September 2006
Empathy; Blessing or Curse?

Have you ever looked someone in the eyes
really deep
Have you ever travelled that long tunnel
to their souls
Have you ever felt the knife in your heart
when you hear them speak
Can you see the knife in theirs?

Did you hear what that girl said?
She said she was raped yesterday
You heard it didn’t you?
But your friend said “she’s a quarter to three”
And the girl ran to class

Can you follow the bloody drops on the floor?
They fall from the arms of that boy in the centre
You can see the cuts right?
But the boy just laughs with his friends
And runs of to class

Do you see the girl in the corner there?
She’s the most beautiful angel you’ve ever seen
You see her don’t you?
But everyone else just walks through her
And she runs of to class

Can you feel the tears on her cheek?
there's enough of them to drown you
And in her eyes you see
You know, her father came to visit her last night
You see it right?
But she joins her pretty friends
And runs off to class

How long can you stand it?
As more and more of your thoughts end up being true
You know it right?
So hurry up, the bell’s ringing
You’ll be late for class

Reviews

Written by Phil (6838 comments posted) 23rd September 2006
Thought provoking and well put together. Who knows what is behind the eyes of apparently 'normal' people. 
 
Liked it. 
 
Phil.
thought provoking...
Written by rilLie (327 comments posted) 23rd September 2006
thought provoking.. an excellent work. 
 
-rilLie

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