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| In a faded world | |
| By Wolfie | ||
| 23 September 2006 | ||
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A long poem i tried to divide but it just wouldn't have it that way anny comments greatly appreciated. In a faded world We share a place A secret place A place of wonder And A place of emotion Time freezes As our gazes tangle together In a silent poem I’m there Lost in a moment I wish was forever When your eyes Answered mine We met, merged Under the table Lying there Separately together On both sides Glorious feeling Indescribable longing When cotton fingers Touch silky hair Ebony and ivory Blessed keys of music Unhinging the door to beauty And forever mesmerize My longing soul I could stay here forever Lost in a moment In a faded world Where nothing exists beyond You, me and us I can’t reach you You can’t reach me And yet We touch Caress softly on your cheek With the touch Of an angels feather Shine forever Silent words Gently spoken And the standing boundaries Never broken Don’t break the moment Don’t move Let me taste you from here Love you from a distance Seconds Minutes Hours They all float by Never touching our world Our faded world Untouched by time Where we fill the void With golden emotions Lock your eyes in mine Unlock your mind I’ll unlock mine for you Let’s share our thoughts Our feelings Let us share ourselves Solar rays have washed Away the lighting stars And the loving moon Little night has gone away With all the feelings Dare we utter the words Dare we accept the truth Explained to us During seven nightly hours Dare we take the consequences Of what that acceptance will bring “Hold me” the creature says The air flows from deep Within her hollow lungs It sips from soft lips Like heavy cream From a heavenly jug “Hold me” she repeats “Love me” she whispers “Stay with me today” Unified twin bodies Rise together to meet For the first time Real Gentle trembling movements Holding on to the gaze Unbroken for so many hours Shocking rays of warmth Spreading with every touch Diminishing distance In mind and in space Soon to be eradicated Blocked solar beams Mysterious softened light Cotton fingers to silk Cotton fingers to silk Gentle pillows play Wet in rush Spreading joyous words Of silent love through Exploring tongues Revealing emotion Hidden with warming cloth Caress the centre of feeling Hide under darkening cover Playing, feeling, loving Surrendering everything To the reward of having Everything surrendered Back to trusting embraces Healing kisses And arousing touches Mellow petals of the rose Hide no thorns when picked And shared between lovers eyes Will embrace the healing Of wounds past and yet to come Eyes, fingers and cotton lips Merge together Outside the presence of time Untouched by the world Pure in all its innocence
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