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What she would have wanted
By MikeMorris
24 September 2006
          Moira looked down at her mother’s still young looking face, wreathed in a peaceful smile.

          “Good-bye, Mum,” she whispered through the tears she struggled to hold back.

          She turned to Alec, her brother. “ At least she went the way she would have wanted. Not knowing a thing about it. Cycling home down the lane from the library, as she did every Thursday. Doctor Muir says she wouldn’t have felt a thing. One second  ringing her bell, the next hearing the bells of Heaven. “

She sighed, “Beautifully put I thought.” She dabbed at her eyes.

“I’ll need to take those books back,” muttered Alec. “Or we might be charged an overdue fine. I’d best read them first, though.”

“By the way, Moira, we’ll need to talk about the arrangements.”

“Oh, I’ll leave all that to you. I’ll be back for the funeral of course, but you see to the rest.”

Alec gave a half smile, “I’ve already put a notice in The Mercury”

Moira remembered, with a nostalgic smile the local paper.

“Oh really? Can I see it?

Alec lifted a newspaper from the sideboard and gave it her.

“There it is,” he said, ”Open at the right page.” He pointed with his finger.

Moira read the obituary and, in spite of the situation, began hitting her brother with the paper.

“Whatever has come over you?” he asked.

“You …you….thing!” she gasped. “Why have you said that?”

“Well, when I ‘phoned up and asked the price the young lady said the charge was 4 words for a pound. So I said to her, ‘ In that case will you please put the following: ‘ Annie Brown has died’. Then she said that that seemed a bit short and I could have another 4 words for free. So I added the last bit. ‘ Ladies Bike For Sale’

 Don’t you like it? I think it’s what Mum would have wanted”

     

Reviews

Written by Phil (6683 comments posted) 23rd September 2006
You're busy tonight. 
 
Very funny, delivered well. 
 
All the best, 
 
Phil.
bargain hunting...
Written by woody44 (774 comments posted) 24th September 2006
Would have gone well in the Comedy slot Mike. Is the bike still for sale? 
 
happy writing 
woody

Written by DieReklamation (9 comments posted) 24th September 2006
I like your humours take on death. :grin

Written by coosh (850 comments posted) 25th September 2006
Delightful, Mike. Really enjoy these sort of stories.

Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 25th September 2006
What more to add? Fantastic 
 
Elli

Written by MikeMorris (106 comments posted) 25th September 2006
Very grateful thanks to ellipinnock,coosh,DieReklamation, woody and Phil for their generous words of encouragement. 
I'm sure you've heard the joke my nonsense is based on. 
Now, ...if I could only clean up "The Great Cracko?" 
Mike
Hi Mike
Written by jean.day (2266 comments posted) 10th September 2007
It was suggested that I read some of your work by Coosh, so have started on this one.  
 
It was good fun to read.

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