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By MangoTheChutneyMan
25 September 2006

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what?
Written by Phil (6959 comments posted) 25th September 2006

Written by Phil (6959 comments posted) 25th September 2006
You're back then? Your eloquence in economic use of words is second to none. 
 
Phil.
Beautifully simple
Written by Talisker (1331 comments posted) 25th September 2006
Simply beautiful. 
 
To have added a ? would have made it too obvious. You have left interpretation to the reader! Fabulous! 
 
Sweet chutney indeed!  
 
Oli.
ECCE HOMO!!!
Written by gerardconnolly (1186 comments posted) 26th September 2006
I am in total agreement with Dr Talisker, who has, at a stroke, unraveled the micro nihalist thread of this masterpiece. 
 
See! there is beauty in the cadence; the stolid wordmastery of the absence of punctual command!! The reo-rhumatic rhymatic arrestation of rhythm! The superlative art of factual fuck all. Veritably a monument to the socio-contemplative neo nonplussed nuke head nooby boy nano nit that dreams up pigshite in his mummy's bed!?  
 
Oh sweet Vergil I am utterly in awe! Mango Man! How much you must have suffered, Divine Mango Man, to write such as this your word is incandescence! Your pain illuminates the burning syllable! A man who has suffered!!!!  
 
Schoolboy poets with your silly teenage drivel.....AWAY!!! 
The MangoChutneyMan visits us today!!!! 
 
How more may one tresspass upon the entrails of mortality.... 
 
Slan!!
Thank you.
Written by givitsum (651 comments posted) 27th September 2006
Thanks once again Mango for sharing this with us. You have a gift that elevates you above the rest. It is obvious from your rare appearances, that your emphasis is clearly on quality as opposed to quantity. 
 
Once again, superb stuff. 
 
Rgds 
 
Givitsum
Speechless...
Written by coosh (923 comments posted) 1st October 2006
I look forward to your reading of this at the Dominion on Tuesday evening with all the passion of a rabid dog. My new date, Anna, a non-English-speaking acousticophobic from Latvia, never stops talking about you, I think.

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